• #365WritingChallenge,  Uncategorized

    Winning Short Story

    Our 365 Writing Challenge group had a short story contest. We judged on ten different areas including voice, structure, pacing, and use of description. Here is the winning entry by Amanda Kaye. The judge loved her use of distinct characters and gripping internal struggle. Desert Thorn The hot wind whistles through the window slit carved near the ceiling, singing to me, promising to carry me far from this house.  “Does the alriyalssa call you to the dunes, Feyna?  Does it whisper the secrets of the sands?” “Stop acting like such a mihana,Di’Ni!  We don’t have much time.”  My aunt groans as she sinks to her knees beside me.  She dips…